Writing Wrongs

Should I write in rhyming words
are you babies I should coo
and speak of love and little boats
of Dr. Zeus’s zoo.

Should I compose a sonnet sweet 
while prayerful folk are weeping
for war has come and killed their own
while their lulled hearts were dreaming?

Should I rave of man’s downfall
and never raise a hand
or shall I write of community
the unity of man.

Hand young and old, a tool to clone
a key to all this babble
an eye to see, a mind to grasp
let them lose the rattle.

For mind is bound to fortune
and blood is bound to pain
governments like sorcerer’s
will fall once it’s seen plain.

Take up the quill, and reach out
observe, recall, rescind
and the power you’ve given others
will be yours in the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Dear Debbie, each line is a story in itself; the message a thoughtful one and each verse more special than the last. Keep up your wonderful verse in the new year. Luv, Lizzie
Conway Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Anything can be written about if you have the creative mind to form the words!Loved it!~Tirzah~
Squyres Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Makes one contemplate....really like it's message. Enjoyed !!!
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 1:21 PM
Beautiful Debbie,I love the ending to. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU DEBBIE ! OXOX love from Anne-Lise
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