Writing With a Pin

Writing with a pin,
I know it is wrong.
Writing with a pin,
Blood is being drawn.

Writing with a pin,
My skin's burning and searing.
Writing with a pin,
It's wrong, but it has a satisfying feeling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 1, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Brittany. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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