Writing After Long

How do I pick up after this long break
The melee of mute thought and emotion
Rims of paper, vials of ink would take
To fill hiatus of this proportion
Nights of lightning, storm and shattering quake
Giving the fallen foliage a shake

Written on:02/01/2017
Syllables:60
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 8:16 AM
It looks like you have started quite nicely Sara.
Kimathi Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 1:21 AM
Congrats Sara, for your WIN in the contest, with this fine piece!!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Congrats for your win, Sara!
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:48 AM
You will back to your great form in no time...This piece is a testament to that
Turner Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Well done, Sara. Those layoffs can be a problem. Good luck:)
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