Writing a Poem

This is what I need to write – 
A pencil and a pad
And someplace where the background noise
Won’t drive me almost mad.

Of course I need a topic
Which will get my brain in gear
Or else from my surroundings, 
Inspiration may appear.

The first line leaps like lightning
From the pencil to the page.
The rest proceeds more slowly
As the thoughts and rhymes engage.

But the ending, ah the ending
Is the toughest nut to crack,
The point where many chuck it all
And let the words go slack.

So oftentimes I’ll read my poem
Again and yet again
Until I find a way to end
And then I’ll say – amen!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Hello Ilene... you certainly explain it as it is; and all in beaut meter and rhyme - thanks again - Lindsay
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:32 PM
g'day, lindsay! it's always a pleasure to hear from you. thank you for reading...
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 9:30 PM
That's the reason, I don't write as much. Too much noise. I I envy the space you lay before you. Like you said, Amen
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:31 PM
thank you, skat! i don't need complete quiet to write (i sometimes write on a park bench with people all around) but just a place where i can tune out my surroundings. i appreciate the comment...
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 9:09 PM
A wonderful poem about the writing process, Ilene! I also have more trouble with the ending, and I never feel finished. I make changes until I'm too exhausted to keep going...I enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for visiting mine. Hugs, Rhonda
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:30 PM
thank you, rhonda! i knew i couldn't be the only one who struggled with endings. glad you could relate...
Buhain-Baello Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Very creatively written and all points of poetry writing conveyed in a very smooth and light way. Wonderful
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:29 PM
thank you for your lovely comment, cynthia!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:56 PM
I LOVE your 4th verse! Ain't it the truth? Beautifully rhymed and rendered my dear... Best wishes, Keith (PS If you have time would you please look at 'Scruples?' I wuold love to have your opinion.) Best wishes, Keith
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:29 PM
thank you, keith! yes, the ending is always the toughest for me. your opinion counts for quite a lot to me so i'm always delighted to hear from you. ~ i've read and commented on "scruples." there aren't many poems on this site that really make me think but your poem sure did...
Merryman Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Great write, Ilene! Are you sure you aren't channeling me? LOL I go through the same thing, as I'm sure most poets do. I enjoyed reading your poem this evening. Love, Kim
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:26 PM
thank you, kim! i figured everyone here could relate to this on some level, even if we have our own styles of writing.
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