Writing

Writing is my passion, Writing is my pain Sometimes I think I've lost More than I'll ever gain There's power in words Only ones that aren't said The truth that lies within them Is nothing but dead More lies have been told Throughout life's history Causing death among all Why? Still remains a mystery

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2015 9:18:00 PM

Kaitlyn Congrats.................... Luv ~Linda~

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 9:01:00 PM

Kaitlyn :) Congratulations in MY keeping it real contest. ~SKAT~

Brittany Larson

Date: 10/2/2014 12:42:00 PM

Choosing your first piece was probably one of my better decision. Very good write. Welcome to the soup. Much love and best wishes Brittany

Dani Elle

Date: 9/22/2014 8:26:00 AM

True. Writing is extremely powerfull =]

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2014 7:15:00 PM

It is a good passion, Kaitlyn, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kaitlyn Avery
Date: 9/11/2014 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much! I love this website and Everyone here is so well, welcoming. Thank you. I will definitely check out the contest and submit a poem :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2014 4:32:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kaitlyn - I choose your first lovely written poem - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/10/2014 12:27:00 AM

Beautiful poem! These lines really made me loose myself in thought! Great form! Welcome to the soup!! - Your friend Edward :)

Kaitlyn Avery
Date: 9/11/2014 11:03:00 AM

Thank you :)