Wripples of Love

she critiqued the written words some she refused to speak out loud she used humor to laugh at what she had read. when the cellist wanted to rehearse the song she told him she didn't feel comfortable singing in perfect English: she wished to sound out the words, and use her voice as an instrument to fill in the spaces ere she thought perfect English lacked the sounds of her style. they sung and played the song first in a mellow way, than in a soothing soulful bass casting perception, getting right what she thought was wrong. It worked it was suggestful but she made angry a person she had said was her friend. For years they had collaborated and wrote music and lyrics together the composer became angry when her words were said to have been perfect English and wronged by the perfection. she thought her friend could have been more creative in criticizing her work.