Wrinkles

Time has erased her
The vibrant young woman
With lines around eyes

©2015 by Regina Riddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mumo Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 9:56 AM
The ravages of time...Irreversible. 7+!
A  Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Regina, wow this will be the best of me one day. I don't mind time erasing a few lines. This is amazing. Forever *SKAT*
Callus Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Hi Regina! Lovely to see you posting again! Time erases the beauty of youth, but there is also beauty in old age, wrinkles 'n all:) All the best. // paul
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 11:36 AM
wonderful to see you back again Regina:-) I have lines and wrinkles but that just part of life i guess:-) Hugs Jan xx
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May 12, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Wow a vivid witty haiku. Yay the fine lines that come with age. Not there yet but wil be in about 20 yrs so l smiled. Thumbs up. I tink i've read u before. Hav u mine?
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