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Time has erased her
The vibrant young woman
With lines around eyes

©2015 by Regina Riddle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 6/12/2015 9:56:00 AM
The ravages of time...Irreversible. 7+!
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Date: 5/17/2015 10:12:00 AM
Regina, wow this will be the best of me one day. I don't mind time erasing a few lines. This is amazing. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:22:00 PM
Hi Regina! Lovely to see you posting again! Time erases the beauty of youth, but there is also beauty in old age, wrinkles 'n all:) All the best. // paul
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Date: 5/12/2015 11:36:00 AM
wonderful to see you back again Regina:-) I have lines and wrinkles but that just part of life i guess:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2015 10:10:00 AM
Gina, I find myself wanting to argue with this poem.. Probably because I love life so much by each day that passes is one less in my total count and I don't want to think when it's over that I've been erased. Time can age us, it can wrinkle us, but does it erase us. I guess for many it does. Live a long life and 200 years from now not one living soul even knew you existed. Unless, of course you did, or said, or wrote something significant. I pray we do!
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Date: 5/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
Wow a vivid witty haiku. Yay the fine lines that come with age. Not there yet but wil be in about 20 yrs so l smiled. Thumbs up. I tink i've read u before. Hav u mine?
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