Wrinkle

Wrinkle Wending through time's wrinkle With a wink and a smile Warped and slightly askew Wandering rabbit holes Winds blow just off-kilter Wardrobe, witch and lion Whimsical fantasies Dedicated to C.S. Lewis, Madeleine L'Engle and Lewis Carroll 5-10-21 Contest Pleiades W Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2021 10:45:00 AM

Hi Sam, Congratulations my friend a clever tribute to the the three Authors. May your pen always flow as it does, with humor and wise thoughts always. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 11:02:00 AM

Greetings Jennifer! "W" turned out to a wacky and wonderful descent into whimsy and new perceptions! Funny how seven lines can accomplish that feat! Thank you for your words of congratulation - so appreciate them dear friend. Blessings and hugs of whimsy to you!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2021 8:58:00 PM

Great flow in your verse, Sam, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:58:00 AM

Eve, thank you! It took me awhile to get into the spirit of the Pleiades - the lyrical qualities of the lines. Thank you for your affirmation of my progress! Hugs and prayers! :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2021 1:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Sam ... well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/12/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise! This was a fun letter! hugs and blessings to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2021 2:44:00 PM

i sure remember this one and glad to be back with my congrats.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:26:00 AM

Thank you!

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/11/2021 1:45:00 PM

A creative look at wrinkle by using three different author's writings. Congrats on your win, Sam! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Kim for your placement and for the delightful and amazing journey into the realm of allegorical fantasy - a new wrinkle! I think I have mentioned how much I am enjoying your alphabetical Pleiades contests. Thank you for your contributions to the soup! Sending you blessings and gratitude.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2021 8:46:00 AM

Hi Sam, congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades Best Regards Sam

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:43:00 AM

Hi Lasaad! Thank you for your congratulations! The letter W led me on a delightful journey through treasured classics. Thanks for "wending" with me! Blessings and all the best of whimsy to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2021 3:46:00 AM

Impressive, my dearest friend, Sam. Blessings.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/12/2021 11:37:00 AM

Thank you dear friend! This is based on three of my favorite adult-children's stories. Take care. Many blessings to you!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/10/2021 4:55:00 PM

Cute. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:40:00 AM

Have a chance to enjoy the whimsy of a wrinkle! Thank you my friend. Glad it brought some whimsy to your day! Blessings always. Love Sam

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2021 4:33:00 PM

Wow, what a great idea you came up with for W. Love it.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:25:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! Can you tell how far behind I've fallen in responding to lovely messages? Had fun with W especially incorporating three of my favorite stories! Take care my friend! :D