Wraps Its Cloak

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Out on the porch as fall's coolness
Wraps its cloak around me
The sun's angular rising light
Reveals dust floating free

The potted Hibiscus' one blossom
Enjoys sun's soft light rays
Unbeknown that frosty air 
Will soon come into play

As the sun climbs higher adding 
Warmth to these old stiff joints
And the roosters begin crowing
Offering their encouraging point

There is a stillness and peace
That only God can give
A crow caws his warning to other
Crows cawing up the hill

Big dog came down to visit now
Lying in the sun's soft light
She scratches fleas? and licks with ease
Not disturbed with might or right

Thank You, God for one more morning
To visit nature and 
Enjoy the creation made by Jesus'
Loving and gentle hands

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Date: 11/10/2021 6:58:00 PM
Pretty images of an idyllic, serene morning, Sara... and credited correctly to its source. Light and Illumination, Gershon
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:16:00 AM
I love the fact you are seem to share a connection with nature. This is very important for us, more important than we realize. Know love, spread love, and strive to be better each day!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2021 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Christopher. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 10/20/2021 9:23:00 PM
Hello Sara ... upon the porch with a mug of coffee observing the surrounds is how your calming poem reads. You are in a good place Sara - Lindsay
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2021 3:31:00 AM
Lindsay, I love to be able to get out there but it doesn't happen very much anymore. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 10/16/2021 1:01:00 PM
You always write with a gentle flow to all your poems Sara, I love the tranquility of your words that spill from your talented writes, this is a wonderful poem, love it. We are all grateful to our maker for another morn. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2021 4:14:00 AM
Why thank you, Jennifer. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Date: 10/15/2021 2:17:00 PM
- A beautiful and peaceful poem, Sara - Enjoy it a lot - Have a lovely weekend ... take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2021 3:28:00 AM
Thank you, SS. I hope your week end is all for which you hoped. Sara
Date: 10/15/2021 1:46:00 AM
We live from day to day, thanking the Goo God for graces received.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/15/2021 4:30:00 AM
Victor, Sometimes it comes down to second to second in my life but God is awesome in all that time. Thanks..SK
Date: 10/14/2021 9:27:00 PM
Wonderful verse, Sara, I have a lot of peace here, it is enjoyable.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/15/2021 4:27:00 AM
Eve, I am glad to know that you have peace where you are and that you enjoy it. So many places around the world that are wrapped in peace and wonder. Your review of my work is uplifting. Sara
Date: 10/14/2021 5:08:00 PM
Sara, You crafted incredible metaphors in this poem, and I liked the imagery you painted. It was very serene. Blessings,
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/15/2021 3:50:00 AM
Lasaad, Your visit made my morning delightful. Thanks ...Sara
Date: 10/14/2021 4:22:00 PM
Sara, I enjoyed the picture you have created in your rhyme.....so peaceful. Blessings, Paulette
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/15/2021 3:10:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette for the kind review. SK
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