Wrapped Reflections

trickle sound of water running
scattered spots of shade and sun
pool hose ripple shadows echo
reflex refraction scarce begun
geometric light equations
hypnotizing sights that run
morning dreams and light reflections
blend in easy folding fun
soft breeze conducting dancing palms
As higher pines display their charms
upright cones stand in ovation
to every moving shade of green
time held still in contemplation
eternal joy so seldom seen
Tip a glass in admiration
Spill a drop or two to those
Who ever stopped to smell a rose
Before these days began

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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Date: 3/13/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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Date: 3/13/2010 10:58:00 AM
This is really good, nice rhythm and indeed very lyrical without necessarily looking like a traditional lyric poem. Hypnotic word choice. Excellent style!
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week..Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Donald, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Donald. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:26:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Janette
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