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Dec. 11, 2023    23.03pm

Wrapped Gifts


Wrapped gifts show great value and importance
Prepared with love to receivers and loved ones
Small and big gifts shared unwrapped or no ribbons
Are done with haste like cakes without icings' boon
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:31 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Wrapped Gifts" write. I wish you would write more. Love to read them. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Gasun Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Thank you so much for reading another written poem of mine dearest poet friend. I will try my best to write more despite the ltasks I still have to do for school this coming new year. Thanks you, thank you sooo much. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Turner Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 5:18 PM
I see what you are saying.. Personally, I think the gift is in the giving:) Merry Christmas, Len:)
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 10:19 PM
I strongly agree with you as well my dear poet friend but the wrapping or a presentable container shows how the receiver is special too. Even the way we share foods, it must be in a container not just in any plastic bag. Thanks a lot for the read and I'm glad to see you back. Merry Christmas too dear poet friend Dan. Hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 3:15 PM
Hello Len, yes it takes time to wrap a gift. Whether big or small. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Hello Len, I am glad you are feeling better now. No fun being sick. I always have a hard time to wrap up gifts. I am a.lways fighting with the wrapping paper. Your welcome. Its okay to be late. Did you pass yhour exams? Enjkoy hyour day my friend. /Darlene/
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Time doesn't matter for me my dear poet friend. When I wrap gifts, I do it with love coz every receiver is special, if unwrapped, I always place it in a beautiful bag or container with ribbons. Merry Christmas to your dear poet friend! Thanks for reading my poem. Sorry for late reply coz I got sick then followed by an exam at school. Wishing you all the best on this Christmas Day! Hugs
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