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January first twenty thirteen This New Year's first day nearly gone It is warm, cloudy, unsettled_ Don't know what will be shown It looks like snow, but much too warm Coyotes' pups yap in woods Someone cuts a treee for a fire The sounds float through greenwoods_ There's an eerie feel in the air Not sure what it is now Is it the quiet before the storm Or the still of day_wow! Written late January 1, 2013 out on the porch

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Date: 1/11/2013 9:48:00 AM
I like your style :) spontaneous
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:23:00 PM
Where the day takes you, I had thoughts on the first Jan too. nice poem . Thank you for reading Stir of Echoes, was made up. Have a great day Sara ;}
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Date: 1/3/2013 6:30:00 PM
some days are like that. I just hope it does not turn into YOW. Love it, Sara
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Date: 1/3/2013 10:16:00 AM
Let's hope its just another year. Good Wow! Love, Daver
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Date: 1/2/2013 9:54:00 PM
Like this,,, the imagery IS AWESOME ;}
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Date: 1/2/2013 8:39:00 PM
Mercy me, Sara...you nailed it!... It's chilly and raining here...cold front coming thru...I really hope it snows...we don't get it much down here...Happy New Year, dear friend - Tim
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Date: 1/2/2013 7:41:00 PM
Hey,hey! I really liked that!.. It made me kind of feel like I was there...And thank you for stopping by.I always appreciate your kindness. :o)
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Date: 1/2/2013 6:45:00 PM
You described it very well, Sara. One can feel the stillness and expecting the storm. Awesome!
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Date: 1/2/2013 6:24:00 PM
Stillness has two edges peace and fear? Nice one Sarah. Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 4:25:00 PM
I would like to be sitting there with you to listen..nice poem..made me daydream
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Date: 1/2/2013 4:22:00 PM
This is another fantastic write of yours my friend! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding and fascinating poem this evening! What a enlightening and intriguing piece, Great Work!!
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Brenda Atry
Date: 1/2/2013 4:25:00 PM
Like your doggy!

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