Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Wow

January first twenty thirteen
This New Year's first day nearly gone
It is warm, cloudy, unsettled_
Don't know what will be shown

It looks like snow, but much too warm
Coyotes' pups yap in woods
Someone cuts a treee for a fire
The sounds float through greenwoods_

There's an eerie feel in the air
Not sure what it is now
Is it the quiet before the storm
Or the still of day_wow!

Written late January 1, 2013 out on the porch

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Terry Noack January 11, 2013 at 9:48 AM I like your style :) spontaneous

Debbie Duncan January 10, 2013 at 5:23 PM Where the day takes you, I had thoughts on the first Jan too. nice poem . Thank you for reading Stir of Echoes, was made up. Have a great day Sara ;}

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2013 at 6:30 PM some days are like that. I just hope it does not turn into YOW. Love it, Sara

Daver Austin January 3, 2013 at 10:16 AM Let's hope its just another year. Good Wow! Love, Daver

Debbie Duncan January 2, 2013 at 9:54 PM Like this,,, the imagery IS AWESOME ;}

Tim Ryerson January 2, 2013 at 8:39 PM Mercy me, Sara...you nailed it!... It's chilly and raining here...cold front coming thru...I really hope it snows...we don't get it much down here...Happy New Year, dear friend - Tim

Dan Kearley January 2, 2013 at 7:41 PM Hey,hey! I really liked that!.. It made me kind of feel like I was there...And thank you for stopping by.I always appreciate your kindness. :o)

Toquyen Harrell January 2, 2013 at 6:45 PM You described it very well, Sara. One can feel the stillness and expecting the storm. Awesome!

Debbie Guzzi January 2, 2013 at 6:24 PM Stillness has two edges peace and fear? Nice one Sarah. Light & Love

Brenda Atry January 2, 2013 at 4:25 PM I would like to be sitting there with you to listen..nice poem..made me daydream

Russell Sivey January 2, 2013 at 4:22 PM This is another fantastic write of yours my friend! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding and fascinating poem this evening! What a enlightening and intriguing piece, Great Work!! Brenda Atry January 2, 2013 at 4:25 PM Like your doggy!