Wounds Unhealed

She loved him more than she loved herself...
But he loved the booze more than he loved her....
Their crazy life together was like a SAD SONG...
"These wounds won't seem to heal"...
"This pain is just too real"...
"There's just too much that time cannot erase"...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Perry Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 4:07 PM
The last three lines are the same as an Evanescence song... Not an accusation just a text to text connection.
Vanderbilt Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Yes..it is the Evanescence song...it's the SAD SONG I was referring to...
Salter Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Sometimes the hardest lessons are the ones that build the most character.
Berdoo Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Char, these are hard facts of some relatiionships.
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