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Wounds So Deep

The pain doesn't cease The blood won't stop pouring In my palm, a permanent crease From the blade that I carry I don't trust myself Neither should you I'll turn my back I'll turn away from you No bandage can cover No pill can hold You'd like to be my lover But I don't think you can handle You want me to share My entire life story But there should be a rating Because it's kind of gory I'll try to open my heart But I can't make any promises This time I'll be smart Because my wounds are so deep *Written on June 19, 2012*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/6/2012 9:41:00 AM
I will be with you until they heal,gently nursing your wounds,your pain I feel,great write Lily
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Date: 7/4/2012 10:42:00 AM
Lily, when the cut hurts a visit to the right court may make it cute without a hoot. Luv this piece.
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Date: 7/4/2012 10:40:00 AM
Lily, cut really hurt but a visit to the right court may make it cute without a hoot. Luv this piece.
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Date: 6/23/2012 3:16:00 PM
"Awesome write here....Lily!!! (sweet+sour=Carma ) 8)"
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Date: 6/23/2012 2:41:00 PM
great write Lily
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 6/23/2012 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Mr. Palmer -Lily <3
Date: 6/20/2012 12:22:00 PM
We all have a choice to me...and you reap what you sow....May he have mercy....and bless you. I pray you find peace.
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 6/23/2012 2:04:00 PM
It's just a poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs