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Wounded Forever

simple rustic fellows come to cities --to make a fortune; pandemic leaves them jobless suddenly--no security! walk back home scores of miles --wounded in feet and heart, forever. 27.5.2020 'Let the pens flow--Sijo 'poetry contest of Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:56:00 PM

It is so very sad what the governments did to us during this pandemic. I truly believe it should have been handled like any flu. Immunity would have come with time. I sure enjoyed your writing.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/14/2020 1:42:00 AM

Andrea, thanx.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/12/2020 7:13:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/12/2020 7:57:00 AM

Aditi, thanx again.

V. Deepa

Date: 6/12/2020 4:23:00 AM

Yes, this is the true situation in our countries presently.Heartmelting lines sir. Lets pray for everything to settle down quickly. And may we all lead a merry life like before. Congratulations on your placement Sir. Keep writing.Best wishes for all your works. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/12/2020 7:56:00 AM

Deepa, thankyou for your profusely warm comments and encouragement. Mohan

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/12/2020 1:28:00 AM

Pathetic situations..but it is out of our hands..Honoured to have your entry in the contest Mohan..

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/12/2020 7:56:00 AM

Jenish, thanx for your encouragement. Mohan

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 6/5/2020 1:13:00 PM

A very nice Sijo on what happened in India to thousands of migrant workers! What a tragedy! Good luck in the contest!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/27/2020 7:02:00 AM

I am amazed at the honesty of your words every time they hit the core with the sad truth around us. It is heartbreaking to see this happening so often now. All the best for the contest.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/28/2020 11:53:00 PM

Thanx Aditi.