Jennifer Arnott Poet Rhyme

Wounded Bits of Pieces

Wounded bits of pieces
                                 When your broken how do you find the pieces
                                               If you get it back together 
                                             How do you erase the creases
                                              The memories don't go away 
                                               The images haunt and stay
                                                    How can you go on
                                               That living in you is wrong
                                                        This is no fun
                                                      Isn't this too long

                                            No pain, no gain, please explain
                                       When it rains, it remains, ease my pain
                                                  Can't be patched, sowed
                                                    Can't be mended, no
                                                    Can't replace my soul
                                                       When its soo cold
                                                   I got hurt, I got burned
                                                     I'll go on, I will learn
                                                     
                                                   The next crash and burn
                                                  I may bruise, I wont yearn
                                               Broken hearts, tattered dreams
                                                 Missing parts, silent screams

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Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2010 at 10:07 PM also sounds like you have known much heartache. I wish you the best, lovely girl, to find what you long for. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown November 22, 2010 at 10:29 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Duncan Chappell November 22, 2010 at 4:01 AM you know how to put your words in line here my friend

Stephen Parker November 19, 2010 at 8:11 AM You describe the healing process in such vivid, stark terms. It reminds me of an old truism; Mending is rending, and bending is not condescending. Hope your hudr is deep enough to build calouses. It will make you a tougher, stronger person.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 19, 2010 at 6:52 AM Wonderful piece Jennifer.. many questions without answers.. except to just make yourself move on..never easy ...but possible. ..luv.. thankxx for your warm and welcome comments on my poetry.. any help u need simply ask me..luv.. for the forms of poetry click on your member page ..then click Resources on the left side .. under Resources list forms of poetry ..by alphabet.. u can read about each form .. and how to write one by the example for each posted.. try the different ones... Rhyme if my fav