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Wounded Bits of Pieces

Wounded bits of pieces When your broken how do you find the pieces If you get it back together How do you erase the creases The memories don't go away The images haunt and stay How can you go on That living in you is wrong This is no fun Isn't this too long No pain, no gain, please explain When it rains, it remains, ease my pain Can't be patched, sowed Can't be mended, no Can't replace my soul When its soo cold I got hurt, I got burned I'll go on, I will learn The next crash and burn I may bruise, I wont yearn Broken hearts, tattered dreams Missing parts, silent screams

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Date: 11/22/2010 10:07:00 PM
also sounds like you have known much heartache. I wish you the best, lovely girl, to find what you long for. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:29:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:01:00 AM
you know how to put your words in line here my friend
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:11:00 AM
You describe the healing process in such vivid, stark terms. It reminds me of an old truism; Mending is rending, and bending is not condescending. Hope your hudr is deep enough to build calouses. It will make you a tougher, stronger person.
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:52:00 AM
Wonderful piece Jennifer.. many questions without answers.. except to just make yourself move on..never easy ...but possible. ..luv.. thankxx for your warm and welcome comments on my poetry.. any help u need simply ask me..luv.. for the forms of poetry click on your member page ..then click Resources on the left side .. under Resources list forms of poetry ..by alphabet.. u can read about each form .. and how to write one by the example for each posted.. try the different ones... Rhyme if my fav
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