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Wound Haiku

wounds that are too deep the scars that still have not healed tears, wet on my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2009 1:44:00 PM
Great Haiku. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2009 2:44:00 PM
Nice work, great form...Raul
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Date: 7/12/2009 1:05:00 PM
Yes, those wounds can be a challenge to heal. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:24:00 AM
good 5 7 5 layout. check out some of my poems
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:19:00 AM
Been there, actually I'm still there, years later. Kinda sad really now that I think about it. Excellent write......Aleera
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