Wound Haiku

wounds that are too deep
the scars that still have not healed
tears, wet on my face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Great Haiku. Sara
Moreno Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Nice work, great form...Raul
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July 12, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Yes, those wounds can be a challenge to heal. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Karen
Meadows Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:24 AM
good 5 7 5 layout. check out some of my poems
De La Keur Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Been there, actually I'm still there, years later. Kinda sad really now that I think about it. Excellent write......Aleera
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