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Wound Haiku

wounds that are too deep the scars that still have not healed tears, wet on my face

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2009 1:44:00 PM

Great Haiku. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/12/2009 2:44:00 PM

Nice work, great form...Raul

Date: 7/12/2009 1:05:00 PM

Yes, those wounds can be a challenge to heal. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Karen

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/12/2009 10:24:00 AM

good 5 7 5 layout. check out some of my poems

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/12/2009 10:19:00 AM

Been there, actually I'm still there, years later. Kinda sad really now that I think about it. Excellent write......Aleera