Wouldn'T It

wouldn't it be nice
that if when i write about her
she was writing about me

wouldn't it be neat
that if i peeked at her
and she peeked back at me

wouldn't it be cute
that when i go to sleep
i would pray for her
and she would pray for me

wouldn't it be swell
if i had a friend to tell
that swore to me
that he wouldn't tell
the deepest secret
i've ever held

and just the same
if she had a friend
upon which she
could also depend
and tell her friend
her secret about me
how she secretly loved me

wouldn't it be sweet
if one day we meet
and found ourselves 
together alone
wrapped in feelings
kept so long

won't our eye's 
give us away
won't our trembling
keep our tongues at bay
would not blushing
show the condition 
of our hearts
wouldn't our studder
not hide our content
of being in our presence
a royal being
a conjunction of the stars
meeting in the sky
the meeting of 
soul mates
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Babcock Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 9:15 PM
To find a soul mate would be very special indeed John. Lovely romantic thought John. God Bless Phyl
Harrington Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 7:09 AM
you better call this girl right now. life is too short to not. smile...janett. well written and great to read.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Nice writing, reminds me of young crushes.
Scoville Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Aww dear John I am sure your lady love feels the same.......Alas for me ...not to be for many years....The Southern Belle....Soup Mail
Austin Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 10:54 AM
So innovative. Great work, John. Good to hear from you, friend. Love, daver
Goff Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 9:39 PM
I have a buddy going through these feelings..and I'm trying to guide him! not easy! good write! jhl! and thanks for welcome comments!... yes! my higher Power is always at my side! (and my Guardian Angel!)
Stone Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:47 PM
that was beautiful i loves it you shoued alot of emotion lovely ~ cortney
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:10 PM
so very charming! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Oh yes it would be grand John. Thank you for sharing your heart today. ~~~Outstanding~~~ Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 2:24 AM
this poem speaks from your heart and soul John......what a soul mate that would be,you writng about her,she writing about you,she prays for you and you pray for her,fiding yourself wrapped with your loved one.a dream of all the people in the world to find true love which isnt always easy--this goes to my favs........it touched me--charma
Devonshire Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 5:51 PM
The things you seek are sought by many of us, John. Finding a soul mate is special indeed. I haven't found any "muscle men" to help with my move, but I am getting very strong with all the lifting. Maybe I should go out for the Olympics weight-lifting competition? Love you! Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
Richards Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Lovely thoughts!! I would grant those wishes for you if I could :)!! Carrie
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