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Would you say? Would you say it’s strange if I said I’ve seen demons while kneeled at the alter with cross in hand Or would it be stranger if I said I saw angels at the bottom of a patron bottle sitting at the cliff ready to jump Would it be strange if I said I felt love from strangers that could care less to know me but did all to support me Or would it be stranger if I felt hate from the ones whose blood I share never realizing that malice to them I would never share Is it strange that darkness provides warmth never pressing only caressing concealing all that’s unwantedly seen Or is it stranger that the light is cold and unforgiving exposing all to eyes of judgment and scrutiny Is it strange that I prefer the snakes, thieves, liars, and thugs because the mistake of trust is nonexistent and the level of pain is only yourself to blame Or is it stranger that “good” people scare me because conformity is key and uniqueness is shunned and to be anything but a pawn is not acceptable

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Date: 7/10/2016 11:07:00 PM
NICE TO READ AGAIN. LOVE JONES...:)
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:12:00 PM
Love Jones, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:21:00 AM
LJ, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:36:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jones. :)
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Date: 5/8/2016 1:46:00 AM
lOve joneS, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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