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Voices swarming from a room High pitched and with synchronicity they loom Constantly overwhelmed, I sit here and stew Thank god for this hoppy brew Stepping outside I beg for peace White smoke rises as I inhale and release Waving goodbye is the sun Behind the mountain top she runs Everyone here grab a spoon Revealed my punchline will be here soon The episode is over so now they go Down our driveway covered in snow Now I can concentrate with appropriate ease Challenging your appetite I begin to tease We are all hungry here in this group So I serve you my heart with poetry soup. By Dustin Riddle

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Date: 2/12/2014 11:07:00 PM
Dustin, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:26:00 PM
that is a really cute ending, you serve your heart!! Everyone that falls in love with Soup eventually writes a poem for Soup and you have done yours quite early!! awesome. and welcome.
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:07:00 AM
Welcome to the soup...good poem!
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:57:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Dustin- I choose your first great written poem :)- hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2014 3:58:00 AM
this is to nice, For a new poet, it seems as if you have this group figured out. makes me want to double up on the appetizer tonight. Dustin, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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