Would You Hear

If I spoke to you of springtime,
Would you hear a single word?
Would you hear the dancing of the leaves,
Or the singing of a bird?

And if I spoke of summer,
Would you listen carefully...
To the chirping of the crickets
Or the buzzing of a bee?

Then should I speak of autumn
Of the red-orange leaves in fall;
Would you hear the seasons turning...
Would you hear them change, at all?

But what if come the winter
As the trees are caked with snow--
Would you hear the wind traverse the wood...
Then listen to it blow?

~M
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:32 PM
My friend, two weeks with new no writes! Hope you are well and will return soon! Take care and shoot me a pm if you like.
Merrill Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Thank you Robert. Nice to know someone cares :) I have posted some poems on Facebook, but that's different...not much feedback there. I did write one the other day which I might post, but I can't think of a title. Oh well. My love to you and your wife. The best to both of you, and look for that poem....it's about the muted tones of yesterday...about change...coming soon! Take care...Mel
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July 29, 2014 at 3:52 AM
- Mel, a beautiful poem - all seasons have something to say .... I love listening to the spring, summer, autumn and winter - Nice to see you today - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Merrill Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Nice to hear from you. Thank you for reading the poem and for commenting on it. The seasons do speak to me, but I sometimes fail to listen. Be well, my dear...xoxo...Mel
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July 29, 2014 at 3:42 AM
I would surely listen, Mel. You have a wonderful way with words, rhymes and meter. Makes it such a pleasure to read. I loved you 4 seasons and how the flowed into each other. Very well done, my friend.... Robert.
Merrill Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. Meter, boring as it sounds, is what allows my words to "flow," and is the reason I am drawn towards rhyme vs free-verse. Thank you again for your astute and intelligent commentary...inspiring!
A   Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:39 PM
LOL, all late... haha.. I guess it's better late than never
Merrill Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 3:33 AM
So they say, whomever they is. It's a pronoun, I know that much!
A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Mel :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
Merrill Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 3:04 AM
Hi Linda...talk about late, look at me!!! Nice to hear from you, regardless. Have a nice weekend, my dear...and be safe! Hugs and kisses...Mel
Lindley Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 11:12 PM
This write was sixteen lines of gold my friend. Last stanza was a huge diamond placed right into the sweet spot!!! I know your life is busy but a few more writes each week would be a very welcomed thing for us here to enjoy my friend. Know this, you are in my estimation a very , very good poet!!!! Life's ups and downs come and go but words often live on far past our time in the dust, the strife, the blessing in such a short life.. Fav'ing this poem for it's deep insight and life meaning !!!!!!
Merrill Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Hi Robert! How nice to hear from you, and such words of support and encouragement! I read your comment and I was moved by it. Perhaps as long as there are nice people like you who will read and appreciate my writes, then maybe I should pick-up the pen :) Thank you for the inspirational words, and for stopping by to say hello. My best to you and yours...Mel
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July 20, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Great descriptive poetry Mel, truly appreciated...Keith.
Merrill Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Thank you, Keith. There was a time when I lived for this site, but as the reading dropped off, I went elsewhere. I do appreciate hearing from you, though; reminds me of how it used to be :) Take care, my friend. Till we meet again...Mel
A   Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Never will you be forgotten by me.. PD
Merrill Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, my sweet. I think of you from time-to-time, and wonder. Funny, this site was everything to me for awhile--the creative compulsive nature, I suppose. I will look for you in the future, even though you are from Texas lol. Hugs...Mel
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July 16, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Hi Mel! I like listening to what you have to say through your poetry. You are a romantic at heart and your writes are always a joy to read. I do try to visit as much as possible, but time is never on my side; even my writing suffers in the process. Don't be disheartened my friend:) // paul
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:22 AM
Thank you Paul. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. As my following dwindled here, I turned my efforts to Facebook where I have, The Poet's Corner (a poem a day, if I can manage it), and, Quote of the Day, t hopefully edify and inspire. Thank you again for the read, and for your keen insight--always welcome...mel
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July 15, 2014 at 7:44 PM
I really love how you described each season, especially winter - as the trees are caked in snow - I never heard it described like that. Great write Mel :) Ana
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Thank you Ana for taking the time to read this, and for appreciating it. Your comments are both welcome and uplifting. Smiles and hugs, my dear...xxx...Mel
A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Hello Mel, I'm not much on the soup these days. However, after reading this you made me realize, how much I miss reading the poet's poem. Thank you for voicing nature, and her beautiful sounds. Glad to read this one from you today... XOX..Linda
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:32 AM
Hi Linda, and thank you for stopping by. Good to hear from you and know that I'm not forgotten :) Lately, I've put my efforts into Facebook, where I post poems and quotes, and with 3,000 friends, or some silly thing, I get more feedback there than I did from here. I'll drop by and post now and then, regardless. Be well, my dear...xox...Mel
Allison Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 7:44 AM
great to see you back Mel :-) Stunning imagery my friend - we have barely had summer yet I don't even want to think about Winter! Hugs Jan xxx
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Hi Jan! Good to hear from you, Ironwoman :) I hope you are well. I appreciate you reading this, and for the supportive comment. I'll be around, as long as there's a tale to tell. Love and hugs...Mel
Nance Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 6:03 AM
I sure would hear! Oh it is a great song that nature sings us. Lovely Mel, How I have missed your beautiful words. What a great poem to wake up to babe. I love it xox
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:40 AM
I always could count on you for support, kitten. This popped in my head while sitting at a Starbucks, but that's how it works with me. I hope you and Abby are well and happy. One of these days I will send you a mail. Keep on smilin', babe. I hope your back is okay; mine hurts like a...fill in the blank. Love and hugs...xoxo...Mel
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:57 AM
Mel...good to see you...very well done..you captured the seasons well.....Tim
Merrill Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 2:41 AM
Thank you Tim. I tried, to the extent the seasons can be captured. Be well, my friend. Bye for now...Mel
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