Would You Have Loved Me?

would you have loved me 
if I had less fire?
if my touch
held less desire?
if my heart 
was less than true?
if I didn't have eyes
for only you?
if my eyes were less green?
my wit less sharp?
would you have loved me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Enjoyed reading J B. Love, Carol
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May 16, 2010 at 3:25 AM
Nice expressions to be desired
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