Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Lyric

Would Love To Hallucinate If

WOULD LOVE TO HALLUCINATE IF…

That rain drop splashed through the window
Still, I could feel your lips shivering
Close to my ears
I could hear your heart beat
Faster and foster
Through the grimy face
I could see your clean silhouette
Quivering and wavering

That rain drop splashed through the window
I knew, I was hallucinating
In the wine I had
A peg of wine again
Could bring back the dream!

-puvi-

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Brian Mcclain March 4, 2016 at 8:07 PM Hi Puvi, That's really nice, very dreamy and mysterious. Nice imagery and rhythm..well done! Cheers, Brian Punnia Viswan Bhatia March 4, 2016 at 10:48 PM aww...so sweet of a comment it is..thank you Brian :)) Hope you are doing good and happy :)) Take care..

Liam Mcdaid December 29, 2015 at 11:31 AM drunken speechless piece so beautiful Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 30, 2015 at 9:09 AM hahahah :)) thank you for the sweet comment :) take care

Arthur Vaso November 16, 2015 at 9:30 PM So beautiful, was the wine a Bordeau? :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 16, 2015 at 11:26 PM hahaha...thank you Arthur :) this is purely fictional ;)

Rob Carmack October 31, 2015 at 9:38 PM From the title I was expecting a blotter, not a peg. Reminds me of a swim I once had in Richmond. Loved this poem. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 31, 2015 at 11:05 PM Haha..so tell me how was your swim..would love to read it..thank you for your time and a lovely comment rob..love and peace :))

Eve Roper October 28, 2015 at 5:10 PM Remnants of Some Silly Experiences, enjoyed reading a 7. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 28, 2015 at 10:17 PM thank you eve :) love, peace and happiness to you :*

Alexis Y. October 28, 2015 at 3:50 PM This is a well written piece . I'm glad I stopped by:-) Alexis Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 28, 2015 at 10:18 PM wow.. I am flattered :)) thank you Alexis :* love and peace dea :))