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Would Life Be Same

Why life begins with a deep cry, And not quietly on the very sly, What is nature’s game? If beginning is wrought with pain, Even before life’s ensuing strain, Who should take blame? If we were all born in good cheer, And life progressed without fear, Wouldn’t it still be same? 3rd placement Written 11/06/2020 Tail line Stanza Sponsor Charles Messina

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Date: 7/7/2020 4:45:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Krish. God bless you :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/15/2020 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Aditi. Pleased you like it.
Date: 7/2/2020 5:51:00 AM
Awesome write, Krish. Congrats on your win! Hope all is well my friend. Charlie
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Date: 7/2/2020 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Charlie! All well with me as COVId begins to weaken. Good to hear from you and hope you have been well. Thanks for this lovely challenge.
Date: 7/2/2020 5:50:00 AM
Awesome write, Krish. Congrats on your win! Hope all is well my friend. Charlie
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Date: 6/16/2020 9:04:00 AM
Maybe it is like the struggle of the butterfly leaving the cocoon. If it is easy the butterfly will be unable to fly.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/16/2020 12:41:00 PM
Thanks. Very true, Richard! Struggle and adrenaline are essential for survival!
Date: 6/15/2020 3:53:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Krish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/15/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Funom! Thanks for reading my poem and your encouraging remarks! :) Regards
Date: 6/13/2020 8:35:00 PM
It would have been beautiful that way. Really peaceful.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/14/2020 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Paghunda. Thanks for reading and appreciating my work!:)
Date: 6/11/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thought provoking words. If everything was simple, we wouldn't have learned our lessons. Best wishes for the contest :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/11/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. No easy answers.

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