Krish Radhakrishna Poet Tail-rhyme

Would Life Be Same

Why life begins with a deep cry,
And not quietly on the very sly,
What is nature’s game?

If beginning is wrought with pain,
Even before life’s ensuing strain,
Who should take blame?

If we were all born in good cheer,
And life progressed without fear,
Wouldn’t it still be same?

3rd placement
Written 11/06/2020
Tail line Stanza
Sponsor Charles Messina

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Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 4:45 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Krish. God bless you :) Krish Radhakrishna August 15, 2020 at 2:13 PM Thanks Aditi. Pleased you like it.

Charles Messina July 2, 2020 at 5:51 AM Awesome write, Krish. Congrats on your win! Hope all is well my friend. Charlie Krish Radhakrishna July 2, 2020 at 8:05 AM Thank you Charlie! All well with me as COVId begins to weaken. Good to hear from you and hope you have been well. Thanks for this lovely challenge.

Charles Messina July 2, 2020 at 5:50 AM Awesome write, Krish. Congrats on your win! Hope all is well my friend. Charlie

Richard Lamoureux June 16, 2020 at 9:04 AM Maybe it is like the struggle of the butterfly leaving the cocoon. If it is easy the butterfly will be unable to fly. Krish Radhakrishna June 16, 2020 at 12:41 PM Thanks. Very true, Richard! Struggle and adrenaline are essential for survival!

Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 3:53 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Krish Krish Radhakrishna June 15, 2020 at 4:08 PM Thanks Funom! Thanks for reading my poem and your encouraging remarks! :) Regards

Paghunda Zahid June 13, 2020 at 8:35 PM It would have been beautiful that way. Really peaceful. Krish Radhakrishna June 14, 2020 at 12:45 AM Thanks Paghunda. Thanks for reading and appreciating my work!:)

Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thought provoking words. If everything was simple, we wouldn't have learned our lessons. Best wishes for the contest :) Krish Radhakrishna June 11, 2020 at 11:20 AM Thanks Aditi. No easy answers.