Francesca Redlich Poet Rhyme

Would It Be

Would it be just fine
If I stayed up all night
But still turned out the light
Sat in the dark and cried

Would it be alright
If I just closed my eyes
Pretend I don’t have to fight
For the rest of my life

Would it be okay
If I just wasted away
Slept in everyday
Until I forget your face.

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2011 at 6:09 AM I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Francesca. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Kyle Kriticos July 19, 2011 at 7:09 PM Very powerful, Francesca. This brief poems holds so much emotion. Thank you for sharing it! Well done.

Poet Destroyer A July 19, 2011 at 7:01 PM F R., i know the feeling, but,, truly sleeping in won't help.... this is a very nice deep poem,, reality to most of us when we want to forget,,, enjoyed,..p.d.