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Would It Be

Would it be just fine If I stayed up all night But still turned out the light Sat in the dark and cried Would it be alright If I just closed my eyes Pretend I don’t have to fight For the rest of my life Would it be okay If I just wasted away Slept in everyday Until I forget your face.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 6:09:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Francesca. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 7/19/2011 7:09:00 PM

Very powerful, Francesca. This brief poems holds so much emotion. Thank you for sharing it! Well done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2011 7:01:00 PM

F R., i know the feeling, but,, truly sleeping in won't help.... this is a very nice deep poem,, reality to most of us when we want to forget,,, enjoyed,..p.d.