Would I Still Be

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WOULD I STLL BE

FROM SUNIO, GREECE, St George Island, My picture!

Good morning rising sun, king of the sky What you have in store for me today, I ignore However, one thing I wish so much to know: Would I be still there at sunset you to adore? * © Demetrios Trifiatis 17 January 2017 * A lady friend is dying from cancer! After a discussion we had I came up with this poem! God bless her!

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Frank Sheehan

Date: 1/17/2017 12:25:00 PM

Yes, God Bless her! Excellent poem once again. Wonderful and memorable.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thank you dear, Frank! God bless you!

Dm Babbit

Date: 1/17/2017 12:18:00 PM

How thoughtful.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2017 12:33:00 PM

Thank you dear, DM Babbit! So kind of you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/17/2017 8:29:00 AM

A very thought provoking piece.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2017 12:40:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, Richard!

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/17/2017 5:38:00 AM

Why this sudden despair in an otherwise vibrant soul ... what an embroidered speech in the quatrain bowl ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/17/2017 6:51:00 AM

My dearest friend, Probir, as you know poets write not only for themselves but for other people as well. In this case I write about a dying from cancer lady! I hope you do not object to that! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2017 4:04:00 AM

- A beautiful poem ... the sun we always shine for you both in this life .... and the next :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/17/2017 6:51:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs!