Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Verse

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WOULD I STLL BE

FROM SUNIO, GREECE, St George Island, My picture!

Would I Still Be

Good morning rising sun, king of the sky

What you have in store for me today, I ignore

However, one thing I wish so much to know:

Would I be still there at sunset you to adore? * 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
     17 January 2017

* A lady friend is dying from cancer! After a discussion we had I came up
with this poem! God bless her!

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Frank Sheehan January 17, 2017 at 12:25 PM Yes, God Bless her! Excellent poem once again. Wonderful and memorable. Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2017 at 12:32 PM Thank you dear, Frank! God bless you!

DM Babbit January 17, 2017 at 12:18 PM How thoughtful. Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thank you dear, DM Babbit! So kind of you!

Richard Lamoureux January 17, 2017 at 8:29 AM A very thought provoking piece. Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2017 at 12:40 PM Thank you my dear friend, Richard!

Probir Gupta January 17, 2017 at 5:38 AM Why this sudden despair in an otherwise vibrant soul ... what an embroidered speech in the quatrain bowl ... Demetrios Trifiatis January 17, 2017 at 6:51 AM My dearest friend, Probir, as you know poets write not only for themselves but for other people as well. In this case I write about a dying from cancer lady! I hope you do not object to that! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2017 at 4:04 AM - A beautiful poem ... the sun we always shine for you both in this life .... and the next :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis January 17, 2017 at 6:51 AM Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs!