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This heart can be so disturbed, I know not With the love of a pretty girl, a poet It thinks of her every second and minute All it breaths, is the love of that poet It's quite a long that this heart is breathed of love For in it mind - fluff is love: No time to love, but to face it way Now, this breath of love is not a play Yet, the poet gives a damn As your proposer-is-condemn But would I succumb?

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Date: 10/10/2017 5:16:00 PM
Let your heart have its say, Afolabi! Who are we to deny it its due! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/9/2017 5:55:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem of yours, Afolabi. Sounds like unrequited love.
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:14:00 PM
Ah the heart ache is a 1000 poems, nice write.
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:31:00 AM
You cant help what the heart feels my friend.. Good luck in your choice..
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