Would I

This heart can be so disturbed, I know not
 With the love of a pretty girl, a poet
It thinks of her every second and minute
All it breaths, is the love of that poet

It's quite a long that this heart is breathed of love
For in it mind - fluff is love:
No time to love, but to face it way
Now, this breath of love is not a play

Yet, the poet gives a damn
As your proposer-is-condemn
But would I succumb?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Let your heart have its say, Afolabi! Who are we to deny it its due! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 5:55 PM
I enjoyed this poem of yours, Afolabi. Sounds like unrequited love.
Vaso Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Ah the heart ache is a 1000 poems, nice write.
One Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:31 AM
You cant help what the heart feels my friend.. Good luck in your choice..
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