Worthy

Right
Lawful
Enduring
Fine citizens
Stay in a good light
Corruption free
Watch and do
Nothing
Wrong


2019 June 16
*1st Place*
Say It In Nine - Old or New
~~Joseph May: Judged 2022 August 19

10th grade11th grade12thninette

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2022 9:36:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win with this very contemporary Ninette. Too many think they are entitled to ignore laws and only take, never give back. Mahalo for your thoughts. Blessings my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2022 11:43:00 AM

Yes, Sam, righteousness is a lifetime virtue. Thanks for sharing your mana'o with me, I appreciate it, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 3:50:00 AM

Political thought in ninette. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/20/2022 6:02:00 AM

I voted thanks, Christuraj, my friend, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/19/2022 7:53:00 AM

An exemplary message of right living William. Children need to learn this from infancy on. Congratulations on your First place win. Aloha and Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2022 8:48:00 AM

I living pono, Connie, having a wonderful time reading beautiful comments from my pono friend, Mahalo~William

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 6:05:00 AM

"Stay in the good light", Congrats on your win Hilo

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2022 6:15:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, for a past recognition, my friend, Aloha~Willam

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/16/2019 11:19:00 AM

A tree is the essence of life - they stand up straight and strong and do nothing wrong! Peaceful, wonderful write William. Well done. Hugs, Jennifer.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/16/2019 11:23:00 AM

In the light, appreciating your astute share Jennifer ~ William