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Worthless

When we first met, I was caring sharing loving to you After awhile together, you were abusing bruising confusing to me Now that I'm alone, I am groveling cowering cringing to everyone Blows that bruise the face can heal without a trace But words keep their ugly embrace that time can never erase Feeling worthless is a place that takes real strength to ever out race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/26/2015 10:02:00 AM
Hi Karen, I can sadly relate to your very poignant and soul-wrenching write. I love the chosen words of the last stanza. Reaches the heart! Be well and be proud of who you are! Much love, Kim xo
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Date: 2/26/2015 7:48:00 AM
some pains are never easy to you erase especially when they've been embedded deeply into our core..you can mask it but never forget, so telling so deep ..thank you Karen,tonytocaa
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:03:00 PM
It does take a lot of real strength to love yourself and out race the feeling of worthlessness! Great poem! True emotions.
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Date: 2/23/2015 5:41:00 PM
Pain of the heart gets lesser with time...great write, I specially like the way you've done the last the last stanza.
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:42:00 PM
Your work captures the emotions of the reader..Great to see this one featured on the homepage ...Sara
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Date: 7/28/2010 1:59:00 PM
gripping tale of need.like the wolf needs the lamb and the cat needs the mouse.without bloodlust the hunter would go to sleep and without the will to survive the prey would simply go away
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Date: 2/4/2010 5:42:00 AM
Either you've been there or you can empathise well, I hope it's the latter, well written
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Date: 2/4/2010 3:59:00 AM
Karen this is a heartfelt write, it makes my blood boil this sort of abuse, find peace, find someone deserving of you thanks Daniel
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