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Worth It

If I could steal the breath of life, If stars could loan soft, their white veins I'd take each planet's time and I'd Still give you each light that remains If I could kindle in some hopeless place, If I could with heart's hearing, spark new stars Or to render with saint's shoulders; the grace To meet you completely, where you are I'd banish all the taxes of time; And halt the high constellations flow, If I were the god I'm not, but I'm Just this beat of time, that wants to know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/29/2020 10:12:00 AM
Hello Joseph Ardern, welcome to Poetry Soup. you know it would be very hard to know everything that goes on in this world. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2019 1:33:00 AM
Very nicely written x
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Date: 12/5/2019 12:05:00 PM
Hello Joseph Ardern, hi. I like the second verse of this lovely poem. Are you getting ready for Christmas? Have a nice day my friends.
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Date: 12/3/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thankyou so much Natalyn and for making me feel so welcome here! Am alright thanks looking forward to Christmas and catching up with my friends and family. I'm from the U.K so we don't really do Thanksgiving but I try to remember to be grateful in my prayers. Are you writing anything at the moment?
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