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World's Facade

the wind, so tranquil moves through the air flipping the grass like tendrels of hair as i lay in peaceful silence joyful thoughts fill my head, of a loving world that has no tears but sadly that will never be for the world is condemned to all eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2010 12:29:00 PM
i feel this i love this thank you duncan
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:10:00 AM
Though I feel that there is a promise through God that the world doesn't have to be condemed, I like this poem. I could feel the movement, so peaceful, giving hope that the world would move in that direction. Very inspirational. Thank you for writing it. Charles
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