World's Facade

the wind, so tranquil
moves through the air
flipping the grass
like tendrels of hair
as i lay in peaceful silence
joyful thoughts fill my head,
of a loving world
that has no tears
but sadly that will never be
for the world is condemned
to all eternity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:29 PM
i feel this i love this thank you duncan
Henderson Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Though I feel that there is a promise through God that the world doesn't have to be condemed, I like this poem. I could feel the movement, so peaceful, giving hope that the world would move in that direction. Very inspirational. Thank you for writing it. Charles
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