World's Dreaming With Pride

when rule's concerned as a whole
total concreteness there's not seen
on the same world climate differs
language religion and many been 

red blood smells differently on earth
even in same family and in same country
in polluted love true feeling's blurred 
for self gain polishes self colors bluntly 

wherever and whatever be anything 
nothing's left to be unchanged in time
to love and feel in body heart's fixed
alas, now lung's love going to be prime 

from the inception rule has been broken
history speaks in pages worldwide
for selfishness humanity's been crying 
by breaking rule world's dreaming with pride 


That rule was begging to be broken - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:46 AM
- Bl my friend, this is a really wonderful write ... a deep and powerful poem! - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thanks for your beautiful comment, my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Marie Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 3:13 PM
A powerful piece, beautifully written, an absolute pleasure to read. The title and subject matter is brilliant for the contest; I wish you much success in all of your writing endeavors. You are very talented! blessings, lynn
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Thanks for your beautiful uplifting comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:54 PM
We are all individuals Cloudy with different wants and needs, but there will always be apples who try to spoil the whole bunch. I think I understood your meaning. Aloha, Connie ; )
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thanks for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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