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World's Dreaming With Pride

when rule's concerned as a whole total concreteness there's not seen on the same world climate differs language religion and many been red blood smells differently on earth even in same family and in same country in polluted love true feeling's blurred for self gain polishes self colors bluntly wherever and whatever be anything nothing's left to be unchanged in time to love and feel in body heart's fixed alas, now lung's love going to be prime from the inception rule has been broken history speaks in pages worldwide for selfishness humanity's been crying by breaking rule world's dreaming with pride That rule was begging to be broken - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2016 11:46:00 AM

- Bl my friend, this is a really wonderful write ... a deep and powerful poem! - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2016 12:31:00 PM

Thanks for your beautiful comment, my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/8/2016 3:13:00 PM

A powerful piece, beautifully written, an absolute pleasure to read. The title and subject matter is brilliant for the contest; I wish you much success in all of your writing endeavors. You are very talented! blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2016 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for your beautiful uplifting comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2016 2:54:00 PM

We are all individuals Cloudy with different wants and needs, but there will always be apples who try to spoil the whole bunch. I think I understood your meaning. Aloha, Connie ; )

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thanks for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl