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Worlds Apart

We're in a crazy Falling fantasy Dancing on the lazy Crazy side of me As we start to spin Dizzy as can be Begins a passion Eyes can't see Taking some time To tease and chase Minds so sublime While senses race We chance the sin That's in our heart And dance within A screen apart

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Date: 5/25/2010 12:53:00 AM
A telling last line Mitch.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:51:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL HOW THIS LOVE IS COMBINED, AND FROM A SCREEN APART, DOES THAT MEAN YOU GUYS KEEP THE LOVE GOING THROUGH THE INTERNET, AWE WHAT A SWEET WRITE
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:39:00 AM
What an interesting and sensual expression ...in this modern world, such emotions can be expressed without ever meeting face to face. Well done!
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Date: 5/24/2010 3:46:00 AM
A very wonderful enjoyable write.
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:43:00 AM
Good morning,amazing Mitch, nice poem, let it flow. It is nice to know we can still get in touch with the ones we love who are apart,..p.d.
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