Worlds Apart

We're in a crazy
Falling fantasy
Dancing on the lazy
Crazy side of me

As we start to spin
Dizzy as can be
Begins a passion
Eyes can't see

Taking some time
To tease and chase
Minds so sublime
While senses race

We chance the sin
That's in our heart
And dance within
A screen apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 12:53 AM
A telling last line Mitch.Rgds Brian
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May 24, 2010 at 6:51 PM
BEAUTIFUL HOW THIS LOVE IS COMBINED, AND FROM A SCREEN APART, DOES THAT MEAN YOU GUYS KEEP THE LOVE GOING THROUGH THE INTERNET, AWE WHAT A SWEET WRITE
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:39 AM
What an interesting and sensual expression ...in this modern world, such emotions can be expressed without ever meeting face to face. Well done!
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 3:46 AM
A very wonderful enjoyable write.
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May 24, 2010 at 2:43 AM
Good morning,amazing Mitch, nice poem, let it flow. It is nice to know we can still get in touch with the ones we love who are apart,..p.d.
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