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World With No Faith

The sky is crying The sun is gone with out trace A world with no faith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/16/2012 5:03:00 PM
Melinde, i like your haiku..a very deep ending we will have....xox~pd
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/17/2012 2:13:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 6/16/2012 5:41:00 AM
nice write Melinde,vanity vs faith,the material things in life has conquered mans' faith..
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 8:09:00 AM
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Date: 6/16/2012 3:32:00 AM
A well done haiku Melinde. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 3:43:00 AM
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Date: 6/16/2012 3:04:00 AM
unique and meaningful comparison .thank you for sharing .jk
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 3:28:00 AM
Thanks.

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