World With No Faith

The sky is crying The sun is gone with out trace A world with no faith
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 16, 2012 at 5:03 PM
Melinde, i like your haiku..a very deep ending we will have....xox~pd
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June 17, 2012 at 2:13 AM
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June 16, 2012 at 5:41 AM
nice write Melinde,vanity vs faith,the material things in life has conquered mans' faith..
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June 16, 2012 at 8:09 AM
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June 16, 2012 at 3:32 AM
A well done haiku Melinde. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 16, 2012 at 3:43 AM
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June 16, 2012 at 3:04 AM
unique and meaningful comparison .thank you for sharing .jk
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June 16, 2012 at 3:28 AM
Thanks.
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