World Turns

the world still turns, though passion burns, if the veil is crossed today, we carry the total experience learned, as our spirit wafts away.... thank you Joan Grisetti..."I Lay Dying" Don
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Williams Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Don, very cool words, good message mate..Dave
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:26 AM
I have enjoyed reading your amazing writing this morning Don. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many a year. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2012 at 10:10 PM
lovely poem Don
Sivey Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Excellent interpretation of Joann's work! Perfectly ingenious if you ask me! I really enjoyed the line, "we carry the total experience learned," what a wonderfully insightful line! Great Work Don!!
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May 31, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Love it Don!! Your work is awesome!!
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