World Is Crumbling Apart

My World is crumbling down,
and everyone is running away.
Everyone left,
and I'm all alone.

People say they are worried,
yet not one has said that too my face.
What can I do, when I feel my World,
splitting in two?

I try so hard,
nothing getting better,
yet my bro is saying,
this is my fault.

I try my best to get that special one,
I conquer fears,
I went though hell,
and yet I fall short.

I have no idea what to do,
Cause my World is Crumbling apart.
What am I to do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 21, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Eric. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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