Andrea Dietrich Poet Acrostic

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World Cruise - Revised From This Afternoon

Who wouldn’t want to take a lovely cruise
Over blue waters with all your cares to lose,
Relaxing on the upper deck and dancing every day?
Land ahoy! You get to leave the ship and see great views
During stops of interest along the cruise ship’s way!

Caribbean or European. Any of them can be such fun.
Royally you are treated! You really ought to take one!
Unless you are allergic to the sunshine and the sea,
It’s simply a no-brainer. Travel lounging in the sun!
Start on any coastline ; tour the world extensively.
End up tan and happy with a lasting memory!

Oct. 9, 2017 For Kevin Shaw's World Cruise Acrostic Poetry Contest

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Hannah Borke October 18, 2017 at 5:39 PM I'm definitely enticed. I once priced it -- not so bad.

James Inman October 16, 2017 at 8:37 AM No world cruise for me Andrea, but I've taken a few shorter ones. I enjoyed them greatly as I enjoyed reading your Acrostic poem.

Scott Thirtyseven October 11, 2017 at 7:47 AM Nice words. My own seem to have dried up, have just had four weeks off -very busy time- but still not a complete poem. Oh well, that's enough about me. Best of luck in the contest.

Ravi Sathasivam October 11, 2017 at 2:36 AM Excellent. Beautiful and nicely done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Matthew Anish October 10, 2017 at 7:49 PM i have only been on one cruise - the the caribbean . i found it very enjoyable. i once sold an article about cruise ships. peace. nice poem matthew anish

Darren White October 10, 2017 at 8:14 AM Great revision :)

Klio Tsitsikroni October 10, 2017 at 6:49 AM I like this one a lot. Nicely done.

Richard Palmer October 10, 2017 at 6:27 AM nicely done,,,wish you the best in the contest Andrea

Russell Sivey October 10, 2017 at 4:58 AM This is a very well crafted write my friend! I enjoyed reading the rhyme scheme of this illustrious poem here this morning! It is a fascinating piece, written as though you have been on a cruise! I've never been on one, and don't really have a desire to...I'd get too sea-sick! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Supraja Kannan October 9, 2017 at 10:45 PM How beautiful! Really a fantastic take on the theme Andrea... Hope it does so well in the contest... Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...

Susan Ashley October 9, 2017 at 9:56 PM An exhilarating write Andrea with a great last line! Well done. Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit October 9, 2017 at 9:05 PM Happy cruising..well done, Andrea!

Frederic Parker October 9, 2017 at 6:41 PM nicely done Andrea, my world cruise was on top of an aircraft carrier along with jets and helicopters...and yes I got quite a tan...good luck in the contest