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World Cruise

We like to respond to Oysters on sea beaches Rustling branches in the wood Love the tall birches Dews drop as she blushes Cucumbers smile on thatch Roses call from your pots Umpteen snails roam Inquiringly on moist spots Sands sparkle at riverside Elegant horses we ride September 27, 2017

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/27/2017 5:47:00 PM

I love your unique images, Probir - who would have thought of roaming snails and smiling cucumbers for this prompt? Love it! Good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/28/2017 4:28:00 AM

Well ... Vast oceans and big mountains are not the only things of pleasure ... If one happens to come across from the boat a face of smiling cucumber, that is far more pleasurable ! ... Thanks for enjoying ... This is primary gain for the poet ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2017 7:11:00 AM

You did well Probir--depicting the theme of world cruise--best for a win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/28/2017 4:39:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay ...