World Cruise

We like to respond to
Oysters on sea beaches
Rustling branches in the wood
Love the tall birches
Dews drop as she blushes

Cucumbers smile on thatch
Roses call from your pots
Umpteen snails roam 
Inquiringly on moist spots
Sands sparkle at riverside
Elegant horses we ride


September 27, 2017
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Krampe Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:47 PM
I love your unique images, Probir - who would have thought of roaming snails and smiling cucumbers for this prompt? Love it! Good luck in the contest.
Gupta Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Well ... Vast oceans and big mountains are not the only things of pleasure ... If one happens to come across from the boat a face of smiling cucumber, that is far more pleasurable ! ... Thanks for enjoying ... This is primary gain for the poet ...
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:11 AM
You did well Probir--depicting the theme of world cruise--best for a win!
Gupta Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 4:39 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
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