Working Hard At the Craft of Rhyming

extra dimensions
locked inside the heaven
of your solar plexus
seven questions presented to
ethereal beings growing restless
true confessions
whispered to alter your
planetary reception
crystal clear celestial communications
with the milky way central nexus
welcome to my connected brain matrix
where I manipulate form and shape
graffiti creations never forgetting to
sketch out and throw down the basics
styles within styles
creating complex variations
meditate and shake with
supernova nirvana vibrations
repeated practice leads to greatness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/20/2014 2:52:00 PM
Oki..Im connected with your brain without w.i.f.i : )!!.And Im still exploring it. Have a blessed Christmas dear Sebastien!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/21/2014 7:56:00 AM
Connected without WiFi, that's funny :) Thanks Charmaine, have a wonderful Christmas and New years! One last thing don't get lost exploring, hope you got a flashlight in your purse some areas are dark.
Date: 12/20/2014 12:53:00 PM
you had some great alliteration but need to work on your rhyming - try purple and orange and find something to rhyme with them!!!! - that's your challenge lol - seriously great write:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/20/2014 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Jan! :) Purple and orange, Ok! I better call the wife and kids I gotta stay and work overtime! Thanks Jan :( .....lol
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