Working Hard At the Craft of Rhyming

extra dimensions
locked inside the heaven
of your solar plexus
seven questions presented to
ethereal beings growing restless
true confessions
whispered to alter your
planetary reception
crystal clear celestial communications
with the milky way central nexus
welcome to my connected brain matrix
where I manipulate form and shape
graffiti creations never forgetting to
sketch out and throw down the basics
styles within styles
creating complex variations
meditate and shake with
supernova nirvana vibrations
repeated practice leads to greatness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Oki..Im connected with your brain without w.i.f.i : )!!.And Im still exploring it. Have a blessed Christmas dear Sebastien!
Baez Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Connected without WiFi, that's funny :) Thanks Charmaine, have a wonderful Christmas and New years! One last thing don't get lost exploring, hope you got a flashlight in your purse some areas are dark.
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 12:53 PM
you had some great alliteration but need to work on your rhyming - try purple and orange and find something to rhyme with them!!!! - that's your challenge lol - seriously great write:-) hugs Jan xxx
Baez Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Thanks Jan! :) Purple and orange, Ok! I better call the wife and kids I gotta stay and work overtime! Thanks Jan :( .....lol
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