Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Working As One

Unity in marriage, business, friendship or love.                                                                                                                                                                                                                          None can exist unless they fit like a glove.
I  for you and you for me that is unity-true love.
Through the days-years we need to be flying like one dove.
You, me, the world in peace and kindness there of.

 

Date Written: 1/19/2021

Note: Acrostic Rhyme

3 Place    "Unity" Old or New for a Prize Contest Judged:1/22/2021      
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire

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Mark Koplin January 23, 2021 at 8:31 PM Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Paula! Have a great weekend! Paula Goldsmith January 24, 2021 at 9:47 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. I am honored to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings..............

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2021 at 11:56 AM - Congratulations on your great win in the Carolyn Devonshire contest, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith January 23, 2021 at 2:38 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. I am honored to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings..............

Rama Balasubramanian January 22, 2021 at 6:38 AM This is beautifully expressed. Great message, every line meaningful. Acrostic nice idea,nice rhyme! Congrats on your win. Take care Rama Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2021 at 10:49 AM Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your congratulations. So glad you like this write. I am honored to have a win. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings..............

Krish Radhakrishna January 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM Congrats on your lovely acrostic with a good message! deserving win! well done! Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2021 at 10:47 AM Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. I am honored to have a win. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings..............

Unseeking Seeker January 22, 2021 at 5:37 AM Beautiful! Congrats, Paula! Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2021 at 10:45 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you this write. I am honored to have a win. Have a wonderful day/weekend with blessings..............

Carolyn Devonshire January 22, 2021 at 4:37 AM Very nice concept, Paula. Enjoyed the read. (true love=two words) It is wonderful to be able to find this type of lasting love. Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this write. It was a fun write to do. I am honored to have a win in your contest. Have a wonderful day/weekend with blessings..............