Workaday World

The bright sun 
       has 
       risen 
       in 
       the 
       sky
  the workaday world 
      has 
         jump started
  into action 
      Automobiles move 
        down city streets
  as pedestrians 
         dodge trucks
    Soon the masses 
will reach their goal
      A cup of coffee or 
      tea
  the day begins
     Minds and muscles 
move 
     Another day in the 
vast metropolis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Lovely Sketch of the metropolis congratulations on having your poem featured this week love Jayne
Haick Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on Soup this week Matthew! And it is a fine piece....Peace, Audrey
Maverick Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 3:05 PM
re your featured poem, understated & to the point, good job¬
Augustus Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 2:18 PM
I love the way you wrote this. I think it made it more interesting to read. It definitely deserved to be featured. Congratulations.
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September 29, 2010 at 8:43 AM
MATTHEW, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 29, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Hello! Matthew again , CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Matthew. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Congrats Matthew on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all today ..with luv...
A   Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Matt, I must say I have not worked long to expierance the work day,lol, I'm still on vacation. i forgot how is feels to be reminded what the sun means for some. My day starts at mid-noon. Enjoyed your poem, havea cool one,..p.d.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Reminds me of "another day, another dollar" but the really talented just might find something extraordinary in that day, such as a bit of fodder for a poem. Wonderful poem Matthew.
Haick Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Love the imagery, Matthew! You captured the workday perfectly, in a few words! Love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Cool poem, Matthew! Workaday world, that is what it is all right, and you know how to put it to words so well. luv Andrea soupmail.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Very well written... Matthew.. very well stated..luv.. hope u will put this in one of the contests offered.. good luck if u do..luv..
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