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(Entry for the Rumi Quotes Poetry Contest, sponsored by Sotto Poet, submitted October 13, 2025)

"Yesterday I was clever, so I wanted to change the world. Today I am wise, so I am changing myself."

Work in Progress

Back in my younger days
I wanted to make an impact,
with my skills and tact,
to impress with knowledge and facts,
hoping I could attract
young minds and bring out their untapped
potential.

I thought "I want to be of service",
but when I saw the response, I got nervous,
often confronting interference
ignorance and indifference.
My idealism slowly faded,
replaced by something more jaded.

My desire to impress
often led to stress
to the point where, I guess,
life became a bit of a mess!

As I got older,
I realized that it was I who had to change
and stop trying to rearrange
my world and all within it.
I wanted to stop feeling deflated
and to enjoy life a little less complicated.

It took quite a while to achieve perspective,
but a benefit of aging is the chance
to be reflective and introspective.
In spite of what a few have said
I know that I am filled with good
and can rise above any falsehood.

My life is still a work in progress,
and my goal of self-improvement
is a very enriching process.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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