Words of Wisdom To the Youth

As tears of strength and courage slip down my face,
I have waited so long for this euphoric embrace.
Through trials and tribulations,
I have kept my head up and marched,
Strived through fearlessly.
Though I walk through the valley of shadows and death,
I shall have no fear.
I know I am meant for more than this.
I strive for perfection,
Which we all know is impossible.
Therefore live life pure and full of bliss.
Be happy,
Take chances,
Fall in love… a few times!
Truly, genuinely learn to appreciate every little thing.
Moments are like shooting stars;
If you don’t keep your head up towards the sky,
You might miss out on the one that will 
change 
your 
life.

March 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bordner Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 2:24 PM
You are a young and beautiful philosopher with real potential for communicating wisdom eloquently - you had the courage to choose this most challenging aspect of Art, hopefully you possess the wherewithal to master philosophical literature - a nice secret is that you are already perfect should you accept it my friend - J.A.B. %
Rose Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:15 PM
This is possibly one of the best compliments I have ever received. Thank you so so very much! You have made my day :)
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June 14, 2013 at 11:00 PM
Andrea. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"
Rose Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Thank you so much and I sure will, have received a lot of compliments from some very kind poet-friends on here. I feel at home where people understand me! haha :)
Scott Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 3:13 PM
VERY TRUE LIFE IS FULL OF OBSTICALS LIKE IT XXX DAVIDSCOTT
The Heavy Hearted Poet Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Another great piece. You have a very solid outlook on life, and that will take you far!
Rose Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thank you so much, I feel that way as well. May not always be positive but I'm not stupid, everyone knows not everything happens the way you want it. things will fall into place when they are meant to. :)
Delaney Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Beautiful advice given with the sweetest Intentions. Thanks for sharing and keep writing SuZ
Rose Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Aw thank you so much SuZ and I plan to!
Tacito Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 10:54 PM
A very necessary message within & between the lines. Nicely done.
Tacito Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Makes a whole lot of sense. I respect & appreciate the effort in making sure the youth gets their mind right. We need it now more than ever. :)
Rose Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:20 PM
I really appreciate your comments Drake. This piece was written and dedicated to a group of high school students (16-18 yr olds I'm 21 not too big of a difference but I have been through a lot for my age so I have been told) I met and became friends with recently, trying to let them know to live their lives to the fullest.
Mohammed Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 8:06 PM
A great write,I thoroughly enjoyed this one Andrea.
Rose Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:19 PM
Thank you so much!
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June 13, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!! This is an incredible piece written here...enjoyed the inspiration. Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Rose Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:17 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome and all the appreciation of my work!
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