T? Tú Poet Ballad

Words of the Heart

This is my first poem. Please tell me if I've made any stupid mistake.


"I wish you were sea

Flow in my heart

Just you can know that

You belong to me

Please give me a tree

I'll turn leaves to kisses

My heart is the sky

And you can freely fly

Or hide in my memory"

That's I want to say

But it's just in my heart

Like water under the sand

You will never understand

Oh! Fly my baby

To find your true love

I'm happy when you're happy.

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Peter Lewis Holmes March 11, 2016 at 4:22 AM Beautiful write Tu'....the only mistake would be to stop writing...Peter

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2016 at 6:24 PM T?, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 7:47 PM Hi, T Tu, thank you for sharing. Hugs... SKAT

Richard Palmer June 4, 2012 at 7:34 AM nice write T Tu

Carol Sunshine Brown May 1, 2012 at 5:46 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you T?. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

T? Tú May 1, 2012 at 2:40 AM Thank you so much.

Vicky Tsiluma April 29, 2012 at 11:47 PM "My heart is the sky..." ...wow! Nice!!!

David Williams April 29, 2012 at 7:09 AM T? welcome to the soup, nicely penned, you chose a ballad but it is more of a rhyme scheme, but it's good..keep writing, have a go at my contest, any questions just soup mail me, best of luck...David