"words of a Poet"

When we accept and concede..
We loose our soul to believe..

Sometimes the song is over but 
the music still streams..
Sometimes a heart not broken
has cracks not seen..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 30, 2010 at 5:21 PM
well said! true words of a poet. Can't wait to come back and read lots of your poems,,,,, always love the words of your poet mind.... Enjoying a few poems today. have a nice one,...p.d.
Sullivan Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 7:13 AM
Incredibly sad but so beautifully written! Your work truly captivates the reader! Amazing!*
Gilly Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:38 PM
very beutiful, and yes i would love it if you could write a poem for me (:
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Lovely sensitive words my White Knight .. so true too.. and enjoyed this creative theme from your gifted pen tonight ... getting ready to watch them Yankees take the series luv.. your Jersey Girl in front of TV and fireplace ... waiting for honey poo..
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Song may be over but it music lingers long same is the true of the heart, Michael
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Interesting three couplets ...All have very true and profound meaning..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that...Sara
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October 20, 2010 at 9:16 PM
That's a very sad thought, a broken heart covering its cracks. I don't believve we ever lose our souls though. Heavy hearts and sad souls may remain earthbound for a time, but I do believe it is inevitable that they will find their way to God's light. Love, Carolyn
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October 20, 2010 at 9:00 PM
I don't know Michael. Does apply at times but can depend on where we stand and who and what we believe in. I know that who I have lost my soul to will give me everlasting life. But, that's just my belief. I hope what you wrote is not yours, but you are certainly entitled to it. Charles
Roberts Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:08 PM
love it Michael
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:51 PM
a very interesting thought, a heart not broken has cracks not seen Yes, that is true indeed! Luv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Oh, those last lines are profound. Well done, Michael!
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