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Words 'Modern Cinquain'

Words
Your Voice
Sounds coming forth
A joy to hear
Speech

happinesslifecinquain

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Debbie Guzzi

August 29, 2012 at 10:15 AM

Sometimes that is all we need to get through a day! Light & Love

Andrew Rymill

May 10, 2012 at 2:39 PM

Carol great Cinquan ....

Chuck Novotny

March 31, 2012 at 12:49 AM

The "dulcid tones" of a loved one's voice ring bells of joy in the soul. Great piece Carol. - Chuck

Black Eyed Susan

March 12, 2012 at 8:46 AM

I know. I hear my husband's voice and no matter where I am, I know I am home. I also appreciate being able to hear, in general, and all of the amazing words and sounds that life holds. it is truly " a joy to hear" :)

Duncan Chappell

March 12, 2012 at 7:56 AM

everything so sweet kiss dear carol ,duncan ,ceizar

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2012 at 3:18 PM

I think modern cinquain goes by words more than by syllable count? In any event, NICELY done. The joy of hearing a dear one speak!

Russell Sivey

March 9, 2012 at 12:32 PM

Interesting form, so is this a 1/2/4/4/1 syllable count? Just curious! Your write really spoke to me! I thoroughly enjoyed your entire poem a lot! And your voice Carol, your written voice, is always "a joy to hear"! I really loved your clever poem that you have written! Great Work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 9, 2012 at 4:17 PM

I soup mailed you the answer Russell.