Words Fail Me

thoughts of you release my light 
tonight light draws your beauty out 
but a fool was birthed this night
thoughts of you release my light 
words keep me from your present sight
why can’t I find a word to shout
thoughts of you release my light 
tonight light draws your beauty out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Like waves to the shore, the repeating lines have a beautiful rhythm.
James Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Thanks Jean...i guess its the idea of a triolet..
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