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Words Can't Save You

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~~ The truth was out there, but pitiful you forgot to read the fine print It seems you misread all the signals, but here is a slight hint, just in case you are wondering . . what you mean to me Your heart is mischievous and cruel, I’ve had enough of it You break every rule and - you use fancy words as your safety net, but some words I can’t forget I am done with you, we are through!! You keep me close to the earth holding my hands together A prisoner to my own worth, tied to the darkness of never I am suffocating underneath your shirt Your heart is mischievous and cruel, I’ve had enough of it You break every rule and - you use fancy words as your safety net, but some words I can’t forget I am done with you, we are through!! DON"T come back to me because now, I am flying free ~~~~ _____________ A little Scribble

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Running Wolves

Date: 12/16/2019 10:02:00 AM

Wow, now this here be fantastically, awesomely, incredibly, wonderful...k.o. In the first round...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/16/2019 1:36:00 PM

K.O in the first round. Oh my!! Thank you Running Wolves. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2019 2:41:00 PM

Letting go means opening the door for another to enter. masterfully expressed Brandy! : ) xxoo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2019 7:55:00 PM

You are right Connie. It is best to look for someone different, when in a relationship such as this one. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 8/13/2019 7:08:00 AM

Wow, I'd hate to be that guy..lol Your scribbles always put a smile on my face Brandy. Even the one's that are as scary and clever as this...Hoping you are well my dear friend. Hugs always Charlie :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2019 7:41:00 PM

No kidding!! Lol. Thank you Charlie. I know this seems a bit on the scary and dark side. But, some moments are just like this. All is well in my world. I am happy that I could make you smile. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 8/10/2019 10:35:00 AM

Soaring into freedom...Very nicely penned Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/10/2019 4:35:00 PM

Exactly!! Thank you Joseph for such a wonderful comment. You are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tracy Storrier

Date: 8/10/2019 7:31:00 AM

really enjoyed this poem Brandy, thank you so much for sharing :o) x

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/10/2019 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Tracy! So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/7/2019 12:48:00 AM

Good for you, you are now flying free- a controlled relationship from either side just does not work and we sometime misinterpret it as caring but one day wake up and realise - hey you, no more of this, be gone! A truly well penned write Brandy, Hugs, Jennifer

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/7/2019 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. No one belongs in such a relationship. Being held too tightly, will cause the heart to ache- until it finally breaks. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 8/6/2019 7:30:00 AM

This write rocks in every way.. its a read again (and again) work. Impressive Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/6/2019 11:02:00 AM

It is so good seeing your thoughts upon my poetic whispers. Such a wonderful thing to say about this little scribble of mine. These words are from the heart, as all my words are. Thank you Lyric Man. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/5/2019 8:23:00 AM

Can I have one more chance? All kidding aside, it’s good to assert your autonomy. It’s best to free yourself from an oppressive relationship.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/5/2019 11:17:00 AM

Awe, of course you can have another chance. Truth!!! I was in a relationship in the past, he was Jealous and Controlling. Not a good place to be in. All is well in my World now. Thank you Richard for your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/5/2019 7:15:00 AM

A relationship like that is doomed to fail. No one can endure being: "A prisoner to my own worth, tied to the darkness of never". You speak to many with this lyric, Brandy. Nicely done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/5/2019 11:11:00 AM

I am sure many can relate to these words. No one should EVER feel like a prisoner while in love. Not in this sense. Thank you Vijay!! You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/5/2019 4:52:00 AM

Love is a two way street, both parties must be free to make their own choices. And if love is true they always choose each other. A wonderful scribble from your heart my sweet friend. All my best. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/5/2019 10:58:00 AM

Your thoughts hold so much truth my dear friend. True love is Never Forceful or Demanding!! Both are willing to make it work. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/4/2019 7:40:00 PM

Point definitely made! ~ gw

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2019 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2019 6:55:00 PM

I really feel ya in this poignant verse, Brandy. Loved the repeating italizied line.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2019 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I wanted to emphasize that thought. This is filled with so many emotions. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy