Words

Words can be like punches
And would you say that they can hurt as much
Would you feel better laughing with the crowd
Or having a strong heart and saying 
That's enough

A bully is a jackal
Preying on the sick and weak
And when he speaks 
He highlights every flaw
It's the meat between his jaws
He reckons its your fault he's hungry

But Words can be like tended gardens
And would you say that they can can heal the soul
Find pieces of a shattered heart
While lightning strikes and thunder rolls
Claim back a suicidal from the edge

Words can be the most precious thing on earth
To uplift the downtrodden 
And bless what was cursed
We are judged by our actions 
But some actions are heard 
Would you believe a disposition can be changed
From the power of your words


By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/16/2017 3:11:00 AM
Truth and uniqueness is in this verse. Very interesting and grateful I've read this. Really super good. -JWE
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Date: 6/28/2016 11:07:00 PM
I agree, words have the most damaging effect, and yes they can be healing as well. Excellent poem Kyle.
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Date: 6/28/2016 3:36:00 PM
So much wisdom and truth in your words, Kyle. I share your thoughts and admire how you translated them into the lovely words of your poem. 7 Sandra
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Date: 6/28/2016 1:00:00 AM
You got that right Kyle, words are tough to absorb and can be more painful than a punch. I like Words, (BETTER YET) when they leave a great feeling inside. Wonderful poem. LINDA
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Date: 6/27/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you for your visit! In a reply to your last two lines I absolutely "believe a disposition can be changed from the power of your words!" This is a power-filled write and I look forward to reading your library! Have the best day!
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Date: 6/27/2016 4:15:00 PM
so very true. This is a great poem, Kyle.
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