Words

writing
~beginning, end
lyrical longings wail
effervescent vowels rise high 
refrain

Poet:D. Guzzi
Contest: Melody of Cinquain

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2011 8:57:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Debbie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 9/11/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your win with this beautiful Cinquain...enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2011 3:01:00 PM

Creative ...Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/11/2011 2:36:00 PM

Conratulations on your stellar win with this amazing cinquain!!!!!!!!----Lori

David Williams

Date: 9/11/2011 3:37:00 AM

hey Debbie congrats on your win..David

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/10/2011 11:35:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie. an interesting take on the subject. well done. cheers Marg.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2011 11:17:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on third place win with this terrific piece in Cinquain.. words so wonderful .. luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/10/2011 10:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Kim

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/10/2011 9:23:00 PM

Nicely done, seems like everyone did their own thing when it came to instructions. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:18:00 PM

I agree with Kash. LIne four was the best! Also line 3.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:17:00 PM

Interesting theme you chose. And for a poet no less! Do you know what is funny to me, Deb? I pronounce Vowel as one syllable here in Utah. I am beginning to think I talk very differently from americans on the east coast! anyway,I see you followed Nette's rules. wish I'd known them earlier. I just don't want to change mine . It just can't be done. If I can't get a new one up, I guess I am screwed. haha. LUv,Andrea